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Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 ![]() |
I felt that the end of the song was too depressing so in a lighter vien, i just wrote the 4th stanza ...
(Its just for fun ... I do not want anyone to sing it) Koi iss taraH se Haskar Humse abhi bolaa Dil taartaar thaa phirbhi Sambhlaa, aur yuN dolaa! Hum unke liye KyuN royeiN? Jo humko bhool gayaa Hum unmeiN se to nahi jo Rassi par jhool gayaa Koi unse jaakar kehnaa Ab bhaad meiN woH jaayeiN! Amod Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
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Amod here is an attempt (sounds weird and not to the mark
![]() With two paras, recorded with mobile, edited with goldwave. May be someone else will do justice to your lyrics. ![]() 2:54@128Kbps |
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Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 ![]() |
Amod here is an attempt (sounds weird and not to the mark ![]() With two paras, recorded with mobile, edited with goldwave. May be someone else will do justice to your lyrics. ![]() 2:54@128Kbps RAVIKUMAR! You have a good voice. Your attempt is indeed commendable. You opted to sing even without a scale guidance (i.e. without the 'SA' of your scale playing) and that is difficult. I suggest that you give another try with the 'SA' playing in the background, as most singers do while singing adlib (i.e. without orchestra), which helps them in remaining in the same scale throughout the song. Thank-you. Regards, Amod Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
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Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 ![]() |
Hi all,
i simply adore the all time great KK song .. 'Pyaar diwaanaa hotaa hai' Today i attempted to write some new words for this song .. i welcome all interested HF members to record these words in the same tune and upload their song. Please make use of the Karaoke track, if possible. If any one does have a KARAOKE track please upload it here, so that others can use it. COME ON ALL KK FANS ! ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Aaj bhi unke, aashiq hai [pyaar diwaanaa hotaaa hai] Batalaanaa to hogaa ... [mastaanaa hotaa hai] Haal-e-dil, kabhi na kabhi [har KHUSHI se har ghamse] (oops i had typed 'Ghadi' instead of 'Khushi') Dohoraanaa to hogaa (2) [begaanaa hotaa hai] Kabhi kahi paayal chchanki [Shamma kaheiN parwaaneiN se] Teri yaad ko ... [Arrey chalaa jaa] Bhulaa ke raKeeb aayeiN [Merii tarraH jal jaayeiN gaa] YaheeiN jashn ko (2) [Yahaa nahi aa] Woh nahi hoNgey to yeh [Woh nahi suntaa usko] Maikhaanaa to hogaa .... [Jal jaanaa Hotaa hai] Haal-e-dil, kabhi na kabhi [Har ghadi se har ghamse] Dohoraanaa to hogaa [begaanaa hotaa hai] --------------------------------- Aaisi chup lagaa rakhkhee hai HumneiN zubaaN pe Unkaa zikr aayeiN kahaaN se Apni zubaaN pe (2) Dil magar majboor hai Batlaanaa to hogaa .... Haal-e-dil, kabhi na kabhi Dohoraanaa to hogaa ... --------------------------------- Koyi humeiN laakh dikhaayeiN HaNsee woH jalweiN .... Bas raheiN niGhaH par chaayeiN Tere Hi jalweiN (2) Ek-baar teraa ho jaayeiN woH Teraa hi to hogaa Haal-e-dil, kabhi na kabhi Dohoraanaa to hogaa. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Amod Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
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![]() Dedicated Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 2510 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Newcastle, UK Member No.: 7772 ![]() |
Amod here is an attempt (sounds weird and not to the mark ![]() With two paras, recorded with mobile, edited with goldwave. May be someone else will do justice to your lyrics. ![]() 2:54@128Kbps Absholutellyyyyy Waaaandddeerrfullllyyyyy... Yakdam, dhaasu gana gaya hai!!! lage raho Ravibhau!!! ![]() Only THIS MOMENT is in my hand and I just want to live that Perfectly!!! ![]() |
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Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 20 Joined: 29-November 06 Member No.: 7733 ![]() |
Hi Ravikumar,
This is the first time I have heard your recording and I am very much impressed with the quality of your voice and tone. It is heartening to hear from people who share the same passion. Keep posting and sharing as often as you can. I am also posting the Karaoke track for pal pal if you or anyone else needs it. Regards Amaanush |
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Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 20 Joined: 29-November 06 Member No.: 7733 ![]() |
Hi Amod,
You have a very special and unique talent and hope that takes you places!!! I also listened to your other compositions; kahna hai unse ye kehna and Chanda Chala ja. Absolutely amazing and a true god's gift. Regards Amaanush |
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![]() Dedicated Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 5434 Joined: 24-January 05 From: Calgary, Canada Member No.: 1583 ![]() |
Hi Amod, You have a very special and unique talent and hope that takes you places!!! I also listened to your other compositions; kahna hai unse ye kehna and Chanda Chala ja. Absolutely amazing and a true god's gift. Regards Amaanush i am beginner- classical -music student..........and i enjoy practicing/singing new lines u wrote here.............thanks for sharing........ .......................................................................
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Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 ![]() |
Hi Amod, You have a very special and unique talent and hope that takes you places!!! I also listened to your other compositions; kahna hai unse ye kehna and Chanda Chala ja. Absolutely amazing and a true god's gift. Regards Amaanush i am beginner- classical -music student..........and i enjoy practicing/singing new lines u wrote here.............thanks for sharing........ Idol, Thanks very much for your responce. i appreciate it. Also, do post something in your voice, so that we can all enjoy it. (Doesn't matter even if its a small clip) Thanks again and keep commenting. Amod Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
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![]() Dedicated Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 5434 Joined: 24-January 05 From: Calgary, Canada Member No.: 1583 ![]() |
Hi Amod, You have a very special and unique talent and hope that takes you places!!! I also listened to your other compositions; kahna hai unse ye kehna and Chanda Chala ja. Absolutely amazing and a true god's gift. Regards Amaanush i am beginner- classical -music student..........and i enjoy practicing/singing new lines u wrote here.............thanks for sharing........ Idol, Thanks very much for your responce. i appreciate it. Also, do post something in your voice, so that we can all enjoy it. (Doesn't matter even if its a small clip) Thanks again and keep commenting. Amod Dear Amod, Unfortunately since I've lost my first laptop, I have no Karaoke, no echo, no jet-audio, nothing available in this new laptop to record a clip and upload it here..........as i said i am not a singer yet and i am just learnin Shudh and Akar from an Indian Ustad for now.........However, i will upload a song that i sang with Azgar khan (he was kind enough to send me one or two songs i sang with him since i've lost my laptop) BUT, at that time i was not even a student of music but a fan of singing ![]() .......................................................................
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![]() Dedicated Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 5434 Joined: 24-January 05 From: Calgary, Canada Member No.: 1583 ![]() |
Hi Amod, You have a very special and unique talent and hope that takes you places!!! I also listened to your other compositions; kahna hai unse ye kehna and Chanda Chala ja. Absolutely amazing and a true god's gift. Regards Amaanush i am beginner- classical -music student..........and i enjoy practicing/singing new lines u wrote here.............thanks for sharing........ Idol, Thanks very much for your responce. i appreciate it. Also, do post something in your voice, so that we can all enjoy it. (Doesn't matter even if its a small clip) Thanks again and keep commenting. Amod Dear Amod, Unfortunately since I've lost my first laptop, I have no Karaoke, no echo, no jet-audio, no MP3 converter, no Zip file to shorten the size, nothing available in this new laptop to record a clip and upload it here..........as i said i am not a singer yet and i am just learnin Shudh and Akar from an Indian Ustad for now.........However, i will upload a song that i sang with Azgar khan (he was kind enough to send me one or two songs i sang with him long ago) BUT, at that time i was not even a student of music ![]() ![]() Azgar Khan & Khobi : Shayad Meri Shaadi Ka Khayal .......................................................................
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![]() Regular Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 898 Joined: 18-January 06 Member No.: 4348 ![]() |
Wah Wah Wah Kya Kehne IDOL Ji Aap Ki Ghayaki Tho Kamal Hai,
Bohot Mazza Ayyee...........I thoroughly enjoyed that ![]() Hope there's more to come ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Dedicated Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 9387 Joined: 6-December 06 Member No.: 8009 ![]() |
Hi Amod, You have a very special and unique talent and hope that takes you places!!! I also listened to your other compositions; kahna hai unse ye kehna and Chanda Chala ja. Absolutely amazing and a true god's gift. Regards Amaanush i am beginner- classical -music student..........and i enjoy practicing/singing new lines u wrote here.............thanks for sharing........ Idol, Thanks very much for your responce. i appreciate it. Also, do post something in your voice, so that we can all enjoy it. (Doesn't matter even if its a small clip) Thanks again and keep commenting. Amod Dear Amod, Unfortunately since I've lost my first laptop, I have no Karaoke, no echo, no jet-audio, no MP3 converter, no Zip file to shorten the size, nothing available in this new laptop to record a clip and upload it here..........as i said i am not a singer yet and i am just learnin Shudh and Akar from an Indian Ustad for now.........However, i will upload a song that i sang with Azgar khan (he was kind enough to send me one or two songs i sang with him long ago) BUT, at that time i was not even a student of music ![]() ![]() Azgar Khan & Khobi : Shayad Meri Shaadi Ka Khayal Idol sis. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() Dedicated Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 4425 Joined: 23-January 04 From: New York (USA) / Hyderabad (India) Member No.: 205 ![]() |
Dear Amod, Unfortunately since I've lost my first laptop, I have no Karaoke, no echo, no jet-audio, no MP3 converter, no Zip file to shorten the size, nothing available in this new laptop to record a clip and upload it here..........as i said i am not a singer yet and i am just learnin Shudh and Akar from an Indian Ustad for now.........However, i will upload a song that i sang with Azgar khan (he was kind enough to send me one or two songs i sang with him long ago) BUT, at that time i was not even a student of music ![]() ![]() Azgar Khan & Khobi : Shayad Meri Shaadi Ka Khayal Topa I didnt get the tea yet ![]() _______________________________________________________________________________
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![]() Dedicated Member ![]() Group: Members Posts: 5434 Joined: 24-January 05 From: Calgary, Canada Member No.: 1583 ![]() |
Dear Anwar Fan and Dear Hum Tum,
THank you very much for appreciating our attempt to sing ![]() let me share you the history behind this song............Azgar kept this karaoke that i got from someone for almost a year, and he was not ready to sing this song.........he was too shy to sing it caoz of all those Shaadi suggestions ![]() ![]() and for Chai, u gotta come to calgary..........besides, be ready to taste Afghani chai, it's not like Indian or pakistani chai............no milk, no cream, no sugar............plain tea with nuts and chocolates ![]() .......................................................................
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