Ok here I am again with a totally different kind of quiz....I am posting two version of poem/songs.... one has been totally made for hindi movie and we all know the superhit song sung by Bhupinder...

The challenge is you have to identify from (A) and ( which one by which poet.... which one is original and which one is modified one ?

(A)
jee dhoondta hai phir wohi fursat ki raat din
baithey rahein tassavur-e-jaanaa kiye huye

(
dil dhoondta hai phir wohi fursat ke raat din
baithey rahein tassavur-e-jaanaa kiye huye

Looks all smae thing... hai naa...but if you see GAUR SE... the meaning also changes somewhat....

Good Luck....

A..By Mirza Ghalib
B..Gulzar in Mausam

Wah Wah doctorji..bahoot khoob....

By any chance you want to attempt for a complete answer.....whats the difference in both of this versions...how does the meaning changes....

jee dhoondta hai phir wohi fursat ki raat din
baithey rahein tassavur-e-jaanaa kiye huye

Night and day the heart searches once again for that leisure....


dil dhoondta hai phir wohi fursat ke raat din
baithey rahein tassavur-e-jaanaa kiye huye

The heart searches again for those days & nights of leisure...

"fursat" = leisure, freedom, rest

Ok I will make it simple...will add a comma and carriage return only at certain position...... figure it out yourself that how just by changing the conjunction "ki" to sambadh-suuchak "ke" gulzar sahab has given it a altogether different meaning.

(A)
jee dhoondta hai phir wohi fursat,
ki raat din baithey rahein tassavur-e-jaanaa kiye huye

(B )
dil dhoondta hai phir wohi fursat ke raat din,
baithey rahein tassavur-e-jaanaa kiye huye

http://www.stanford.edu/~ajohri/blog/archives/000072.html

1) in life looking forward to the same relaxed period, whereby i can sit down day and night and dream of you.

2) the heart is looking again for the same relaxed day and night, when i used to dream of you.

Waah Waah

seeing this late in the day, thanks to that "legendary" discussion elsewhere. Ab yeh huee na koi quiz. Keep'em coming, BJ.

This is part from what I come across learning it myself. I can keep it coming but than the audience is limited in this kind of topics ...

Beej,

Mujhe to aapka quiz bilkul bumper gayaa, but don't be like the aam janta mahn, agar kam viewrship hain to kya hua, if a select few are enjoying it and appreciative of it... aap chalu raho. Hain na??

T