QUOTE(Amaanush @ Aug 9 2007, 09:14 AM)

Amod and HFM friends,
Here is an attempt at Amod's lyrics for hum bhi dil ka haal based on Kishoreda's pal pal dil ke paas.
Gustakhi Maaf cos I added a hein to the first line. I had lot of fun singing this song to your lyrics. Will appreciate your feedbacks
Regards
Amaanush
Vijay,
i really enjoyed your rendering!
What i am about to say / write may be too ambitious ...
But ...
i imagine if THE GREAT KK had sung this song he would have given similar vocal expressions in his rendering.
BTW, i admit, the 'hein' feels OK ... no .... it actually feels GOOD.
In the last stanza (which was actually written only for fun) has the words:
dil taar taar thaa phir bhi
The 'Taar Taar' actually is as in 'Aar Paar' (Taar Taar means 'torn in shreds' or devastated )
Thanks, for all the efforts. You were extremely good (i mean it).
Lets hope we will partner in many such creations.
Take care.
Amod