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Amod
post Sep 6 2009, 05:36 PM
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Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?


Thanks.

Amod



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post Sep 15 2009, 12:05 PM
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A good try and nice wordings!


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QUOTE(Amod @ Sep 6 2009, 10:06 PM) *

Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?


Thanks.

Amod

Amod Ji

Honestly speaking, without being polite, I have to say I like the tune and mood it creates - very hummable and gentle paced. Lyrics have never been of that much interest to me so can't comment on them.

I will say though, that your natural singing voice is very good. If you took singing lessons (quite a few lessons tongue1.gif ), you really wouldn't need to visualise someone else singing this.


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post Sep 17 2009, 12:09 PM
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A good try and nice wordings!


Erum ji,

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.

Whatever i have sung is different from what i intend the tune to be .. that is to say
that apart from not being in 'sur', i have not been able to sing the various 'harkats' that
are there in the composition.

If i were to teach this song to a professional (and talented) singer to sing, i would
preferably play it on the harmonium (which i have already done). Secondly this
song is a female's expression and has to be sung by a female artist.

BTW i heard your songs on your thread. You have a good clear voice. Keep singing
and posting. (even will love to hear this song [charagoN se...] in your voice)

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post Sep 17 2009, 12:21 PM
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QUOTE(Faraaj73 @ Sep 15 2009, 01:49 PM) *

QUOTE(Amod @ Sep 6 2009, 10:06 PM) *

Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?


Thanks.

Amod

Amod Ji

Honestly speaking, without being polite, I have to say I like the tune and mood it creates - very hummable and gentle paced. Lyrics have never been of that much interest to me so can't comment on them.

I will say though, that your natural singing voice is very good. If you took singing lessons (quite a few lessons tongue1.gif ), you really wouldn't need to visualise someone else singing this.


Faraaj,

Thanks for your comments.

Since i do not consider myself a singer (which is good), whenever i write & compose a vintage
hindi film song (of course just as a hobby), i have to visualize the picturisation, the actors & actressess,
the playback singers (Kishore da, Rafi Saheb, Mukesh, Talat, Lata etc) in order to setup the mood, so to say.

And then the words & tune materialize. And my tunes are such that its out of my own capacity to sing!

Regards,

Amod

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post Sep 23 2009, 03:11 AM
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Hi Amod,
Beautiful rendition. I loved both the tune and the lyrics...in fact, I loved all...your voice as well.
Keep up with the good work.
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Hi Amod,
Beautiful rendition. I loved both the tune and the lyrics...in fact, I loved all...your voice as well.
Keep up with the good work.
Sanjay



Thanks Sanjay ,

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Hi all,

One new happening ..... May be .... Talat & Madan Mohan Combo ... atleast thats what i felt in THE dream

The lyrics ...

Khushi me, Gham me teri yaad leke jhumenge
Piyee bhi na ho magar, yaad leke jhumenge

Ghazal Ghazal me basaate use hai hum aaye
Umeed ke wohi ashiyaar leke jhumenge

Sharab se bhi nahi jab chadhe khumaar hame
Usi nazar ki wo saugaat leke jhumenge

Wo hasi pal, jo mere pyar ne kamaye hai
Usi daulat ko sar-e-aam leke jhumenge

Kabhi na jaan sake hum tumhari fitrat ko
Hu.aa badnaam jo hai naam leke jhumenge

Amod

As usual ..... Awaiting your comments..


p.s. i am not a professional singer! Just a postman trying to deliver something from 'THAT WORLD' to our world!







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