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Posted by: nm007 Aug 14 2005, 01:02 AM

here, new thread for vivek and lataa
go ahead, discuss the old and new poems

lets represent all marathi poets in here

Posted by: nm007 Aug 14 2005, 01:06 AM

Tap Tap Tap Tap Taakit Taapaa chaale maajhaa ghoDaa
paaThiivaratii jiin makhamalii paayii ruperii toDaa

ghoDaa maajhaa phaar hushaar
paaThiivar mii hotaa swaar
nusataa tyaalaa pure ishaaraa
kashaas chaabuuk oDhaa
paathiivaratii jiin ....

Thats all I remember

it was a baal giit, who wrote it? anybody has sung it? All that has gone where childhood memories go!

Posted by: Lata Aug 14 2005, 01:39 AM

uncha ubhaaree donhee kaan
aiteeta dolavee maan kamaan
madhecha kevha dudakata dudakata
chaale thodaa thodaa
paatheevarati jeen makhmali ........

saat aranye samudra saat
olaandita haa eka damaat
aala aala mazjhaa ghoda
sodaa rastaa sodaa
paatheevarati jeen makhmali .......

NM...urs is the second stanza. Its sung by Sushma Shreshta.

Posted by: Lata Aug 14 2005, 02:07 AM

vihin baai vihin baai utha atta utha..........I remember this first line of the poem/song.......but donno if it was taught in school....or I learnt it from my friends while playing house house

vihin baai vihin baai utha atta utha
bhaatukli chaa saaryaa tumhi kelaa chattamatta
pasaa bhar shengdaane pasaa bhar gool
ekateena fasta kela laagala kaa khool?
khaadaadkhaau viheen mhanoon saree karati thatta
kuthun mela baahuleecha lagna kaadhalaa amhee
viheen mhanoon nashibi aalata ho tumhee
baali amchee naajuk, tumachaa baalyaa kevadhaa mothaa
sonyaasaarkhi lek dilee ani phasalo
bhikaaryaanshee naata jodoona basalo
varamaai chaa pokala nusataa pahoona ghyaavaa taathaa

this I got from the net.......cudnt understand _______ is there a word fasta? what does it mean?

Posted by: Dhananjay Aug 14 2005, 08:00 AM

Lata,
"fasta" means to gobble up food. You use it like "GaNesh taatyaa.ni sagaLyaa Jilbyaa fasta kelya"

Posted by: Lata Aug 14 2005, 08:28 AM

Thanks Dhananjay then that word in the blank must be fasta

Posted by: vivekpm Aug 14 2005, 12:00 PM

This reminds me of a poem I had in my school textbook. Does anyone have a complete poem?

First lines are:

Tap Tap Padti Angavarti Prajakta Chi Phoole,
Bhir Bhir Bhir Bhir Tya Tala Var Gaane Amuche Jhoole...

Cheers,

Posted by: kcp Nov 1 2005, 02:42 PM

wah wah wah !! You guys are awesome !!

So many memories have come alive ( actually I forget many things !! )

The best one I used to like - Saang Saang Bholaanaath Paaus Padel Kay !!!!!!!

We used to listen to the radio continuously ( thanks to my mothers love towards Marathi songs )

!!!

Super forum !!

Posted by: unmeshpatil Nov 2 2005, 12:10 PM

Te june sundar diwas athavtaat. Apan tevha kiti niragas hoto. Fantastic post. I am getting nostalgic.

Posted by: Mandrake Nov 2 2005, 12:22 PM

Hey Vivek, saw this just now.

I remember reading this poem (tap tap padti...) in my school way back in...1970!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Will try to get you the words, but the continuation is:
kuraNaan varati, zaadaankhaali
oon-saaooli viNate jaaLi...

Posted by: vivekpm Nov 9 2005, 05:48 PM

And I saw this today. Was away. Thanks!!! Remember these lines too. Would love to read entire poem again.

Cheers,

Posted by: august Feb 8 2006, 09:19 PM

hi kavita SHIV KALYAN RAJA madhye aahe.
shirwadkaranchi ahe. ani lata ne gayili ahe.


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Posted by: august Feb 15 2006, 10:04 PM

another one.
it was recenlty uploaded in forum.


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Posted by: Lata Feb 15 2006, 10:54 PM

august...did u upload this song? ....can u pls tell me in which forum it was posted...........Thanks

Posted by: Bawra Jay Feb 16 2006, 12:12 AM

can u all remind me of a poem ... as kid I use to love it..

it goes something like.. ye re ye re .. paus aa.. paisa jhala khota... paus aala motha...

Posted by: Bawra Jay Feb 16 2006, 12:16 AM

never mind .... i was able to google it

Yere Yere Paausa

Yere yere paausa
Tula deto paisa
Paisa jhaala khota
Paaus aala mottha
Paaus padla jhim, jhim, jhim
Aangan jhaale olechimb
Paaus padto masuldhar
Raan hoil hirvegaar

Ye g Ye g sari
Majhe madke bhari
Sar aale dhaavun
Madke gele vaahun

http://www.indiaparenting.com/rhymes/marathi/mr001.ram

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 12:29 AM

awww....absloutely adorable.........the kid has sung it sooo sweetly ..Thanks for sharing it Jay

Posted by: august Feb 16 2006, 12:54 AM

thanks jay. childhood memories are sweetest of all.
lahanpan dega deva..
mungi sakharecha rawa..

lata,
i think it was sarvatmaka sarveshwara

and lyrics are - sarvatmaka shivsundara.

both songs might be different.

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 01:00 AM

august...I am talking about sarvatmaka shiva sundara only ...I remember listening to this song during my school days .......was this song uploaded in any of the forums? ...BTW r u a maharashtrian?

Posted by: august Feb 16 2006, 01:38 AM

hoy. mi marathi ahe.
tu pan marathi ahes ka?

Posted by: nm007 Feb 16 2006, 01:40 AM

lata, I remember having this discussion a few days ago. about these two being different songs and I think someone uploaded the sarvatmakaa shivsundara but I cant find it. so may be not

sorry, I am not much help here

and yes, august is another puNekar

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 01:44 AM

Can someone please upload that song for me....Jay/ Dhananjay/anyone ..... ....August and Punekar ....is it .......mee pan Punekar aahe ...Punyaat kuthe raahtos tu? ...wowie

Posted by: august Feb 16 2006, 01:57 AM

f c road
ani tu?

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 01:59 AM

sahi......aamhi kothrud la raahto ...NM tu kuthe raahots? ...me visarle ...sowwie

Posted by: Bawra Jay Feb 16 2006, 02:06 AM

Which song ? I guess not Sarwaatmaka Sarveshwara... Gangadhara shivsundara ??? ... If that is the one u looking I have by Pt Jitendra Abhisheki.... (Confim and I will upload it here.. ) ...

Posted by: august Feb 16 2006, 02:06 AM

i think nm shaniwar wadya jawal rahto.
nm mhanaje peshwa ahe dusra

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 02:11 AM

Jay.......I am looking for sarwatmaka shivasundara sweekaar yaa abhivaadana ..its sung by a female singer [ atleast the version I heard long ago ]

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 02:13 AM

ashnar ashnaar..kinwa nashnaar dekhil ...tu atta Punyaat aahes ki videshi?

Posted by: august Feb 16 2006, 02:15 AM

mi ithech ahe
deshi sodun mala kahi awadat nahi.

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 02:21 AM

are waa .... .......vaishali hotel chya jawal raahots? ..... tu majhya gadhvya angel la kasa olakhtos? [ tyaala sangu nakos ki me tyaala gaadhav bolle ] evdhya raatri jaagun HF surf kartoyes ....

Posted by: august Feb 16 2006, 02:28 AM

lata,
tu post madhye tyala gadhav mhanalis. mi kay karu?
mi vaishali pasun ardhya km var rahto.
amchi olakh hf chat madhye jhali.
chal ata jhopto. ushir jhala

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 02:30 AM

tyaala marathi yet naahi na { or does he know }

Posted by: nm007 Feb 16 2006, 03:17 AM

naahi, peshawyaanchaa gupther
kinvaa saaDetiin shahaaNyaatalaa diiD-shahaaNaa

Posted by: Lata Feb 16 2006, 03:24 AM

NM ...its been suchha long time since I heard all these words ...feels good ...got transported to Deccan Gymkhana for a moment

Posted by: Dhananjay Feb 17 2006, 01:40 AM

Not me..... malaa tar he gaane maahit suddha naahi !!!
I'm sure it can't be "sarvaatmaka sarveshwara", coz NM uploaded it a few days ago. But with all this excitement about it, I guess it's a good song !!

Posted by: Dhananjay Feb 17 2006, 02:44 AM

Hmm... yaacha vishayaavara PuLanchi ek kavita sapadalii -
(No offence meant to Punekars, kaaraNa mii suddhaa puNekar aahe )
मी राहतो पुण्यात
मी राहतो पुण्यात
म्हणजे विद्वत्तेच्या ठाण्यात.
इथल्या मंडईचेदेखील विद्यापीठ आहे.
आणि विद्यापीठाची मंडई झाली आहे.
बोलणे हा इथला धर्म आहे
आणि ऐकणे हा दानधर्म आहे.
म्हणून वक्ते उपदेश करतात
आणि श्रोते उपकार करतात.
उपचारांना मात्र जागा नाही

Posted by: Bawra Jay Feb 17 2006, 03:13 AM

LOL... so true na.... the only way I was connected to PUNE was ONLY because of education

Posted by: Bawra Jay Feb 17 2006, 03:16 AM

Here is one I like.....

Posted by: august Mar 1 2006, 09:36 PM

my Bhau sent me a poem. here it is. i don't know anything about poet./ess

Posted by: august Apr 4 2006, 04:18 AM

grace chya kavita ha ek anubhav asato..
ashich ek kavita.......

Posted by: august Apr 4 2006, 04:20 AM

grace nantar ajun ek "manaswi" manus: nana patekar

nana has composed a poem and i got it from my friend
nana ne he pahile tar yeun mala marel...

Posted by: nm007 Apr 6 2006, 12:40 AM

feels like nana, crazy (and also oDhun taaNuun aaNalelaa aav)
since I am not much of a fan of grace or other so called modern "manaswii" kavitaa here is one nice old school poem by borkar

चपल तुझे चरण जरा या घरी स्थिरावे
आणी दिव्य किरण तुझे अंतरी शिरावे

कुठुनी कुठे सांग जाशी,
उधळीत आनंद राशी
आळवीत गौरवीत दीप राग भावे
चपल तुझे चरण जरा या घरी स्थिरावे

श्रीहरीचे नाभीकमल
ब्रह्म्ह्याचे प्रज्ञास्थल
तृतीय रुद्रनयन तूची प्रकटिशी प्रभावे
चपल तुझे चरण जरा या घरी स्थिरावे

शककर्त्या शुभ वचनी,
प्रमदांच्या रतीनयनी
सज्जनमन वृंदावनी किती तुला भजावे
चपल तुझे चरण जरा या घरी स्थिरावे

तव चंचल मृदुचरणी
सांकुर कुसुमित धरणी
बघुन मुदित स्थिर चर का मी उगी रहावे
चपल तुझे चरण जरा या घरी स्थिरावे

मम जीवन घुंगुरसर
बांधीन तव पदी सत्वर
क्षण भरी तरी तव चरणी त्या निनादवे

चपल तुझे चरण जरा या घरी स्थिरावे
आणी दिव्य किरण तुझे अंतरी शिरावे

and a picture for those who cant read the squiggles above


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Posted by: august Apr 7 2006, 02:24 AM

NM, mala wachata ale.

mi grace cha fan ahe pan nana mala actor mhanun awadato. tasa loud ahe to pan ok ahe.

tujhi kavite madhala "chapal" shabd wachun borakaranchi ek kavita athawali...

gadad nile gadad nile megh bharuni aale
sheetal tanu chapal charan anilgan nighale...

Posted by: nm007 Apr 7 2006, 02:40 AM

since you rememeberd it an excellent example of anupraas, aliteration

gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale
shiital tanu chapal charaN anil gaN nighaale

din la.nghunii jaay girii, pad umaTe kshitijaavarii
padmaraag vR^ishhTii hoy maaD bhavya naache
gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale

dhu.nd sajal hasiit dishaa, tR^iNaparNii sajja tR^ishhaa
tR^iptiiche dhan ghanaat baghunii man nivaale
gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale

utaT baghunii harii karuNaa harit dharaa ho gahanaa
ma.ndaakinii varunii dhaval vihagavR^i.nda Dole
gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale

rajat niil taamr niil sthir pal jal pal saliil
hiravyaa taTii naavaa.nchaa kR^ishNa meL kheLe
gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale

miin chamakunii usaLe, jalavalayii rav misaLe
navathar ras ra.ng gahan karitii nayan ole
gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale

dhuusar ho kshitij twarit, ghor pathii achal chakit
tR^iN visaruunii javaLiil te khiLavii gaganii DoLe
gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale

Tap Tap Tap paDatii the.nb manii vaniiche vijhatii Do.nb
vatsal ye vaas, bhuumii aashiirvach bole

gadaD niLe gaDad niLe jalad bharunii aale
shiital tanu chapal charaN anil gaN nighaale


and devnaagarii

गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले
शीतल तनु चपल चरण अनिल गण निघाले

दिन लंघुनी जाय गिरी, पद उमटे क्षितिजावरी
पद्मराग वृष्टी होय माड भव्य नाचे
गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले

धुंद सजल हसीत दिशा, तृणपर्णी सज्ज तृषा
तृप्तीचे धन घनात बघुनी मन निवाले
गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले

उतट बघुनी हरी करुणा हरित धरा हो गहना
मंदाकिनी वरुनी धवल विहगवृंद डोले
गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले

रजत नील ताम्र नील स्थिर पल जल पल सलील
हिरव्या तटी नावांचा कृश्ण मेळ खेळे
गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले

मीन चमकुनी उसळे, जलवलयी रव मिसळे
नवथर रस रंग गहन करिती नयन ओले
गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले

धूसर हो क्षितिज त्वरित, घोर पथी अचल चकित
तृण विसरूनी जवळील ते खिळवी गगनी डोळे
गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले

टप टप टप पडती थेंब मनी वनीचे विझती डोंब
वत्सल ये वास, भूमी आशीर्वच बोले

गदड निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले
शीतल तनु चपल चरण अनिल गण निघाले

Posted by: august Apr 7 2006, 02:43 AM

tula he sagale paath asel tar tujhe KOUTUK ahe.

ani nasel, tar te folder mala pan pathav.

Posted by: nm007 Apr 7 2006, 02:49 AM

paaTha asel tar! do you doubt that?????




actually its neither. I just listened to "aanandayaatra kavitechii" P. L. reading borkar's poem and transcribed the poem.
(I have that one on cassette. I dont think it was issued in CD)

Posted by: august Apr 7 2006, 02:53 AM

sorry!!!!

majhyakade 2 cassette cha sanc hahe. P L ani suneeta bai.. (alurkar music house! paryaay nahi! )
mast ahe tya kavita.
i like "japani ramalachi ratr".

tujhe vijeche chnadpakharu deepraag gaat
rachit hote shayan mahali nili chandraat

ratirat kukkutasa kundivar arohun maad
choch khupsuni fulvit hota pankhanche jhad

pudhe athavat nahi.
P L mast gaatat hi kavita.

Posted by: nm007 Apr 7 2006, 02:59 AM

just for you

Posted by: nm007 Apr 7 2006, 03:01 AM

http://marathi-kavita.blogspot.com/#ghana

Posted by: august Apr 7 2006, 03:18 AM

dhanywaad!!!!!!!!!!!
kahi na magata milale ki kasa anand hoto tasa anand jhala mala!!!!

a-pra-ti-m

ani BA KI chi kavane ahet majhya kaanat..

Posted by: august Apr 11 2006, 03:29 AM

suresh bhat yanchi ek kavita..

Posted by: Lata Apr 11 2006, 04:27 AM

agadi surekh aahe kavita

Posted by: Walker Apr 11 2006, 01:40 PM

Hi gazal Bhimrao Panchale yanni gayili aahe

Posted by: Dhananjay Apr 11 2006, 08:43 PM

Wow August !!!
It's too good. And as Walker pointed out, it conforms to all the rules for a ghazal.
Suresh Bhat has been known for writing ghazals in Marathi ( I was first surprised to know that there is such a thing as "Marathi ghazal" )

Posted by: august Apr 13 2006, 01:45 AM

marathi ghajal che master = Suresh Bhat

many of his songs sung by lata are actually ghazals only.

sunya sunya maifilit majhya...
malwun tak deep...
ujadalya wari...

Posted by: Bhrung Jun 12 2006, 11:00 PM

कविवर्य सुरेश भटांची अजून एक सुंदर गझल - 'पाठ'

Posted by: OMkar Jan 13 2007, 12:27 AM

Aaai ga!!!! Kaay shabda aahet!!!

OMkar

Posted by: august Jan 13 2007, 01:55 AM

Omkar,

ghazal in Rutu Hirwa is apratim too.

Bhogale je du:kh tyala sukh mhanave laagale
evadhe mi bhogile ki maj hasaave laagle..

i like this stanza best-

Lok bhetayas aale kadhatya payasave
an akheri kushal majhe maj pusaave laagle..

Posted by: OMkar Jan 13 2007, 04:59 AM

Arey kaay sangu... Jeev jaychi paali yete, to stanza aiktana!!!

OMkar