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Amod
post Jun 17 2007, 07:56 PM
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Hi All,

I have being seeing & hearing songs in my dreams of and on. On the rare occasions when i remember the song after waking up, i have tried to put it on paper, both the notations as well as the lyrics. These songs have never existed otherwise. You call this a gift.

Some such songs, i have had them sung by professional singers (of course those that i have an access to and can afford). I am uploading one of the song.

This song that i dreamt of was sort of typical Hindi film piano song. The hero was Randhir Kapoor and it was sung by Kishore Kumar!

Here it is:

The lyrics and composition is mine.

Song: Kehna hai unse ye kehna
Singer: Jitendra Abhyankar
Bit: 56kbps (Sorry about that, but still the quality is good)
Duration: 03:53
Year of recording: 2000

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod

p.s.

Only in 2002, i dreamt of one more stanza from the same song (a slow & sad one) so it did not get included in the above song.




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post Jun 17 2007, 08:46 PM
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QUOTE(Amod @ Jun 17 2007, 03:26 PM) *

Hi All,

I have being seeing & hearing songs in my dreams of and on. On the rare occasions when i remember the song after waking up, i have tried to put it on paper, both the notations as well as the lyrics. These songs have never existed otherwise. You call this a gift.

Some such songs, i have had them sung by professional singers (of course those that i have an access to and can afford). I am uploading one of the song.

This song that i dreamt of was sort of typical Hindi film piano song. The hero was Randhir Kapoor and it was sung by Kishore Kumar!

Here it is:

The lyrics and composition is mine.

Song: Kehna hai unse ye kehna
Singer: Jitendra Abhyankar
Bit: 56kbps (Sorry about that, but still the quality is good)
Duration: 03:53
Year of recording: 2000

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod

p.s.

Only in 2002, i dreamt of one more stanza from the same song (a slow & sad one) so it did not get included in the above song.


Amod,
You are indeed gifted. Why did you not (don't you) continue with this in making it your profession. Great to know you and have you as true lyricist, composer amongst us. Keep it up. I wish you all the best.
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post Jun 18 2007, 10:14 PM
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QUOTE(Amod @ Jun 17 2007, 07:56 PM) *

Hi All,

I have being seeing & hearing songs in my dreams of and on. On the rare occasions when i remember the song after waking up, i have tried to put it on paper, both the notations as well as the lyrics. These songs have never existed otherwise. You call this a gift.

Some such songs, i have had them sung by professional singers (of course those that i have an access to and can afford). I am uploading one of the song.

This song that i dreamt of was sort of typical Hindi film piano song. The hero was Randhir Kapoor and it was sung by Kishore Kumar!

Here it is:

The lyrics and composition is mine.

Song: Kehna hai unse ye kehna
Singer: Jitendra Abhyankar
Bit: 56kbps (Sorry about that, but still the quality is good)
Duration: 03:53
Year of recording: 2000

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod

p.s.

Only in 2002, i dreamt of one more stanza from the same song (a slow & sad one) so it did not get included in the above song.


Amod,

I can not believe my ears. So nicely rendered !!!. Are you a professional singer? Much above many professional singers. Please let me know about your profession & other details. If you are shy of doing so, you can PM me the same. I can advise you properly.

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post Jun 19 2007, 11:30 AM
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Sanjay & Kamala,

Thank you for the appreciation. I am flattered.

Kamala, actually i have only written and composed the song.
It has been sung by Jitendra (as specified earlier) and yes, he IS a good singer.

As i said earlier, i have dreamt about the songs which i say 'I' have composed.

Actually, they have just 'fallen in my lap', so to say. So it has not been any
effort on my part (other than to get up in middle of a dream any time of the night and
writing / recording (on a walkman) the lyrics & the tune)

I am not to judge 'my own' songs. I have listened to such greats of Hindi film
music, that i do not think much of these creations.

The sole consolation is that in the said dreams i clearly hear the GREATS singing
the song that has never existed. Sadly it is even less than 1% of the time that
i recollect the song after waking up!

Kamala, since you asked, i am a freelancing software consultant.
I like to sing but am not a professional singer. Even my technical knowledge
of music is almost zero.

Amod

p.s.

This song (and 3 more) are recorded in a studio with proper music arrangement.
There are others which have been recorded on a walkman (without any music)

In case you are interested, i can upload some.




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QUOTE(Amod @ Jun 19 2007, 11:30 AM) *

Sanjay & Kamala,

Thank you for the appreciation. I am flattered.

Kamala, actually i have only written and composed the song.
It has been sung by Jitendra (as specified earlier) and yes, he IS a good singer.

As i said earlier, i have dreamt about the songs which i say 'I' have composed.

Actually, they have just 'fallen in my lap', so to say. So it has not been any
effort on my part (other than to get up in middle of a dream any time of the night and
writing / recording (on a walkman) the lyrics & the tune)

I am not to judge 'my own' songs. I have listened to such greats of Hindi film
music, that i do not think much of these creations.

The sole consolation is that in the said dreams i clearly hear the GREATS singing
the song that has never existed. Sadly it is even less than 1% of the time that
i recollect the song after waking up!

Kamala, since you asked, i am a freelancing software consultant.
I like to sing but am not a professional singer. Even my technical knowledge
of music is almost zero.

Amod

p.s.

This song (and 3 more) are recorded in a studio with proper music arrangement.
There are others which have been recorded on a walkman (without any music)

In case you are interested, i can upload some.


Thanks Amod for your clarification.

Anyway, I should say Mr Jitendra is a very good singer. He has the Style / flavour of Kishore Da songs. Please extend my thanks to him.

Yes, certainly I would like to get those 2 songs. Please do upload.

Thanks,

Kamala Mohanty
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post Jun 19 2007, 06:46 PM
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QUOTE(sanjkash @ Jun 17 2007, 08:46 PM) *

Amod,
You are indeed gifted. Why did you not (don't you) continue with this in making it your profession. Great to know you and have you as true lyricist, composer amongst us. Keep it up. I wish you all the best.
Sanjay


Thanks Sanjay,

Any profession, that sustains, i believe, is God's gift.
I am happy about mine (at least for now).

Thanks for your kind words.
Regards.

Amod














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post Jun 20 2007, 10:33 PM
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QUOTE(Amod @ Jun 19 2007, 02:16 PM) *

Any profession, that sustains, i believe, is God's gift.
I am happy about mine (at least for now).
Amod


Amod,
You are right. I just felt that the lyrics, composition and (Abhyankar's) singing was to a professional quality.
Anyway, please upload whatever you have created out of your dreams, there will be enough appreciations from all.
Sanjay

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post Jun 21 2007, 03:52 PM
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Hi all.

This is a gazal (although the rules about the 'kafiyaa' have not been adhered to)
The lyrics are from my dream. The tune is not from the dream (since i did not remember it)

I have prepared the tune while awake.

This has been sung by Mukund Phansalkar (disciple of Pt. Hridaynath Mangeshkar)

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod

Title: Zubaan tera naam le jawaab de gayi
Bit: 56 (But quality is good)
Duration: 05:13
Singer: Mukund Phansalkar





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post Jun 22 2007, 03:39 AM
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QUOTE(Amod @ Jun 21 2007, 11:22 AM) *

Hi all.

This is a gazal (although the rules about the 'kafiyaa' have not been adhered to)
The lyrics are from my dream. The tune is not from the dream (since i did not remember it)

I have prepared the tune while awake.

This has been sung by Mukund Phansalkar (disciple of Pt. Hridaynath Mangeshkar)

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod

Title: Zubaan tera naam le jawaab de gayi
Bit: 56 (But quality is good)
Duration: 05:13
Singer: Mukund Phansalkar


Amod,
Another excellent piece at professional level. This gazal (lyrics) is simply superb and tune/music composition is excellent as well. I wish you dream more and continue to share more of such creations.
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post Jun 26 2007, 09:13 PM
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Hey Amod,
I usually don't visit section much....But the name of your thread got me interested and I heard the songs you composed. They are really amazing thumbs-up.gif bow.gif And it's really impressive that you could compose them without any professional training. You are truly gifted (Honestly, I didn't expect much from the songs when I downloaded them) !!!
Keep up the good work man.. and make sure you upload more of your compositions.

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post Jul 4 2007, 12:40 PM
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QUOTE(Dhananjay @ Jun 26 2007, 09:13 PM) *

Hey Amod,
I usually don't visit section much....But the name of your thread got me interested and I heard the songs you composed. They are really amazing thumbs-up.gif bow.gif And it's really impressive that you could compose them without any professional training. You are truly gifted-Dhananjay


Dhananjay,

Sorry for the late reply. I was away for almost a week.
Thanks for the appreciation.

QUOTE(Dhananjay @ Jun 26 2007, 09:13 PM) *

(Honestly, I didn't expect much from the songs when I downloaded them) !!!
-Dhananjay


That, i think, must be the case with many visitors to this sub-forum.
See the title of this sub-forum itself is so derogatory .. 'Sur mein na sahi'

(Arrey yeh bhi koi title hu_aa?!!!
It should be something like .. 'Hamara Hunar Bhi To Dekho!' or something positive of that sort)

The current title is certain to disuade prospective visitors .. isn't it?

QUOTE(Dhananjay @ Jun 26 2007, 09:13 PM) *

Keep up the good work man.. and make sure you upload more of your compositions.
-Dhananjay


Hope i can.

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Amod




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post Jul 4 2007, 09:49 PM
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QUOTE(sanjkash @ Jun 22 2007, 03:39 AM) *

Amod,
Another excellent piece at professional level. This gazal (lyrics) is simply superb and tune/music composition is excellent as well. I wish you dream more and continue to share more of such creations.
Sanjay



Sanjay,

Thanks for the appreciation.

Regards,
Amod

p.s.

Sorry for the late response. I was away for almost a week.









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post Jul 7 2007, 08:20 PM
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Hi All,

This is a song which has not been formally recorded in a studio. (it is without orchestra).

A brief background about this dream and the song is necessary.

Here it is:

Its a marriage that i am attending. I have dinner and leave. It is dark outside. I leave the wedding hall and am passing the parked cars, on the way to the main road, where i can hire a cab. As i walk along the dark path, i see some kids laughing and singing in a van. The van has its back side open. As i pass the van, i realize that they were playing antakshari (a song game)

I pause. They are little boys & girls aged around 6 to 7 years. And now, it is a boy's turn to sing a song. And he sings this song!

And wow its actually Lata Mangeshkar singing in her vintage voice.

The said song is extremely difficult to sing. Only the very accomplished singers can sing this. Luckily i knew someone who can do so. He is a disciple of Pt. Hridaynath Mangeshkar. His name is Mukund Phansalkar.

Mind you, there is no orchestration in this song.

Amod

Here are the lyrics:

Chandaa! chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa. O Chandaa! (#2)
Phirse aanaa, jab woh aaye; Dil ko abhi naa behlaanaa!

O Chandaa!
Chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa. O Chandaa!

Raat bitaayi, rotein rotein
Roothi hai nindiyaa aatey aatey
Saaraa samaaN yeh ruk gayaa gaatey
Tu hi chubhan pehchaaney naa! (1)

Pyaare musafir kaise sapney?
Tujh mein hi dekhun mere apney
Dil ki yeh dhadkan lag gayi rukney
Ab to piyaa se milaa denaa! (2)

Chandaa; chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa. O Chandaa!
Chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa, chalaa jaa. O Chandaa!


As you listen to this, just imagine Lata Mangeshkar's vintage voice..

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod




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QUOTE(Amod @ Jul 7 2007, 09:20 PM) *


This is a song which has not been formally recorded in a studio. (it is without orchestra).

As you listen to this, just imagine Lata Mangeshkar's vintage voice..

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod


Amod,
An amazing song once again !!!! party2.gif wave1.gif
To me, this was the best of the songs uploaded till now. I didn't read your message before I started listening to the song and I assumed that lack of orchestration was intentional (somehow it seemed natural for song's theme).
My favorite piece in the song, was the little twist that you have given to the word "aayein" (in the line - "phir se aana jab woh aayein").
The only thing that may need improvement are the lyrics mellow.gif (Again, for a one-man-music-house that you are, it would be too much to expect that you excel in all aspects of the songs. If I ever composed music, my songs won't have even a tenth of sweetness as yours.. )

Kudos to you man bow.gif

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post Jul 12 2007, 12:48 AM
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Amod,
Notice, I have started downloading BLINDLY your work(s) now.
No doubt, excellent one once again.
Keep it up. Thanks
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