My New Composition (scratch Recording In My Voice), Song type: Vintage Hindi |
My New Composition (scratch Recording In My Voice), Song type: Vintage Hindi |
Amod |
Sep 6 2009, 05:36 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 |
Hi All,
Participating after a long time. Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back. It was visualized as sung by Lata ji. Will be glad to know your views (critical). Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident, just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune. CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai? Thanks. Amod This post has been edited by Amod: Sep 6 2009, 05:56 PM Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
Amod |
Sep 15 2009, 12:05 PM
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Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
Erum Hashmi |
Sep 15 2009, 12:18 PM
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Faraaj73 |
Sep 15 2009, 01:49 PM
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Dedicated Member Group: Members Posts: 2198 Joined: 1-July 08 From: Sydney, Australia Member No.: 58864 |
Hi All, Participating after a long time. Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back. It was visualized as sung by Lata ji. Will be glad to know your views (critical). Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident, just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune. CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai? Thanks. Amod Amod Ji Honestly speaking, without being polite, I have to say I like the tune and mood it creates - very hummable and gentle paced. Lyrics have never been of that much interest to me so can't comment on them. I will say though, that your natural singing voice is very good. If you took singing lessons (quite a few lessons ), you really wouldn't need to visualise someone else singing this. Kind Regards Faraaj Music expresses that which cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent. - Victor Hugo There is only one better thing than music - live music. - Jacek Bukowski I hate music, especially when it's played. - Jimmy Durante No good opera plot can be sensible, for people do not sing when they are feeling sensible. - W. H. Auden |
Amod |
Sep 17 2009, 12:09 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 |
Erum ji, Thanks a lot for your appreciation. Whatever i have sung is different from what i intend the tune to be .. that is to say that apart from not being in 'sur', i have not been able to sing the various 'harkats' that are there in the composition. If i were to teach this song to a professional (and talented) singer to sing, i would preferably play it on the harmonium (which i have already done). Secondly this song is a female's expression and has to be sung by a female artist. BTW i heard your songs on your thread. You have a good clear voice. Keep singing and posting. (even will love to hear this song [charagoN se...] in your voice) Regards, Amod Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
Amod |
Sep 17 2009, 12:21 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 |
Hi All, Participating after a long time. Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back. It was visualized as sung by Lata ji. Will be glad to know your views (critical). Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident, just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune. CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai? Thanks. Amod Amod Ji Honestly speaking, without being polite, I have to say I like the tune and mood it creates - very hummable and gentle paced. Lyrics have never been of that much interest to me so can't comment on them. I will say though, that your natural singing voice is very good. If you took singing lessons (quite a few lessons ), you really wouldn't need to visualise someone else singing this. Faraaj, Thanks for your comments. Since i do not consider myself a singer (which is good), whenever i write & compose a vintage hindi film song (of course just as a hobby), i have to visualize the picturisation, the actors & actressess, the playback singers (Kishore da, Rafi Saheb, Mukesh, Talat, Lata etc) in order to setup the mood, so to say. And then the words & tune materialize. And my tunes are such that its out of my own capacity to sing! Regards, Amod This post has been edited by Amod: Sep 17 2009, 01:46 PM Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
sanjkash |
Sep 23 2009, 03:11 AM
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Regular Member Group: Members Posts: 862 Joined: 16-January 07 Member No.: 9573 |
Hi Amod,
Beautiful rendition. I loved both the tune and the lyrics...in fact, I loved all...your voice as well. Keep up with the good work. Sanjay |
Amod |
Sep 27 2009, 10:42 AM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 |
Hi Amod, Beautiful rendition. I loved both the tune and the lyrics...in fact, I loved all...your voice as well. Keep up with the good work. Sanjay Thanks Sanjay , TC Amod Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
Amod |
Oct 26 2009, 07:57 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 296 Joined: 9-December 06 From: India Member No.: 8112 |
Hi all,
One new happening ..... May be .... Talat & Madan Mohan Combo ... atleast thats what i felt in THE dream The lyrics ... Khushi me, Gham me teri yaad leke jhumenge Piyee bhi na ho magar, yaad leke jhumenge Ghazal Ghazal me basaate use hai hum aaye Umeed ke wohi ashiyaar leke jhumenge Sharab se bhi nahi jab chadhe khumaar hame Usi nazar ki wo saugaat leke jhumenge Wo hasi pal, jo mere pyar ne kamaye hai Usi daulat ko sar-e-aam leke jhumenge Kabhi na jaan sake hum tumhari fitrat ko Hu.aa badnaam jo hai naam leke jhumenge Amod As usual ..... Awaiting your comments.. p.s. i am not a professional singer! Just a postman trying to deliver something from 'THAT WORLD' to our world! Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
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