हमारी मेहफ़ील

Friends,
After providing my micro critics on others, it is time for me to get some from you.
Continueing on variety, I thought of singing female song in my voice.
Now just warning you ahead, I cannot be a female, so take this as my version, but I expect you to provide full ciritcs without hesitation.
Another thing is the same story, whenever I upload in Esnips, it looses the quality. So please let me know if this one is acceptable, otherwise I will upload a .rar file here. I know I have missed few things here and there, so I am going to check whether you are providing true critics or not.




Enjoy and please provide comments.
Thanks.
Sanjay

Baaaaappp Reeeeee, Maine Socha Tu Bhool Gaya Hogaa!!!!! Kaheko Kaheko Mere Peeche Pada Hai Re Tu, Bangdu!!!!

Aur yaar, in this complete song, there are so many 'Jiske'... Which one are u referring to? Before I used to think that this song is so simple and beautiful... Lekin Mereko Kal Pata Chala, Kee Baap Re Baapp, Yeh Ganaa Hai Yaa, SHIV DHANUSH!!!! And u know this is the exact reason, I used to describe my thread 'Guru And Chela' as 'Chela Encounters Guru Songs'.... Gana Sunte Hain, To Baat Ek Hain... BUT Jab Wohi Gaana Gaate Hain, To Baat Kucch Aur Hai... Naye Naye Parde Utarte hain Aur Asli Gaane Ki Beauty Samajh Mein Aani Lagti Hai!!! Then u realise, its really a SHIV DHANUSH Am I right??????

Please argue on my comment!!

Aaii Gaa, !!!! What a song u chose.... Let me hear it once again... U know what? I was even thinking of singing some female songs in my voice without caring if sounds good or bad.... But u broke the ice and now I am more relaxed!!!!!!

One thing I can tell after hearing it for the first time!!!!
1. Sanjay, is there some noise around ur voice in this songggg!!!
2. Chain se Hum ko kabhi has become little flat.... put correct breaks in btw 2 words... extremely imp for expressions and to avoid flatness in the expressions
3. do some hard work on the Murkis taken by Ashaji in this song more.... You have done welll but I am sure, you can do better than thiss... And when you sing it more better, u will see how much u will enjoy ittt!! If u have harmonium or synthesizer, practice each and every Murki before u even think of listening to this Karaoke track!!!!

4. Aise Hi Gaata Reh Mere Dost!!! Good Good!!!

p.s. Yaar could u upload this karaoke track and give us ur eSnips link here? Let me add u in my friends!!!!!!!!

Well you guys wont believe me, even i was preparing to put up a female song...amazing!!

sanjay, i am very familiar with the mukhda but not the antara of the song. After listening to you, i can say you have sung it VERY beautifully and i really enjoyed listening to it. In fact, I feel opposite of what OMkar bhai has said. I feel u have put in more variations than in the original song. I feel the original song is a smooth up and down song, with lots of twists coming in some key words, but not in the sentence per se. As long as you take care of those key words, u r fine.

Example: In the first line 'Chain se humko kabhi, aap ne jeene na diya', the ornamentation is in the word 'kabhi' only. In the second line, the key word is 'chaha', and when the first line is sung again, the focus is on 'chain' not 'kabhie'. I hope u understood me.

But since I was not too familiar with the song, I was not in the 'compare with the original' mode. So i really enjoyed it

Unleashing a Lata-Madan Mohan combo Sung with no music (sorry guys)

Just have to say one word "Waahhhh"
Bohat khoob brother! Keep up the good work.

Sanjay Bhai Yaar......Wah ......Oh...Ho....Kya Ghazab Gaya Hai Re Toone, Ek Dam Ghehraee Mey doob kar gaya hai, zabardast feelngs ke saath, ek ek lafz kya khoob gaya hai......beautiful modulation....Haye....Haye, Mey Ab Kya Kahoon........beautiful Tehrau....emotes nicely.

Harish Bhai Yaar Mere Dost......I was thinking of doing this Lata's number, I am sooooo pleased you beat me too it........superb gaya hai mate........sadqe jaooon yaar

Track for your song is available here
http://www.esnips.com/doc/002ecda2-b83f-41...ap_ki_nazron_ne

Ab Me Lataji ka koi aur gana try marunga maybe Agar Mujhse Mohabbat Hai or Ankhyon Ko Rehne De (bobby).............may be next life time

I've got Agar Mujhse Mohabbat Hai Track but it's soooo lousy.....flippin sounds like nursery tune or some musical score for commedy scene

Hope its ur voice, Anwar Mian!! I will hear it and let u know

Arey Azgar Mian, Kahan Ho Aap?? Dikhai Hi Nahin Dete!!!! Yaar, where are all ur songs??? Come on man, we need you here, dude!!!

Mashallah, what song u have sung yaar Harish!!! Total SUR mein gaya hain.... Voice mein consistency bhi bahut hai!!! There are some places, where you became suddenly little weak. But that may be because of the breath.

One suggession: Now think of singing this same song (GEM) with all those little Taan, MIIND, Murkiss as taken by Lataji (I know its difficult, but try karne mein koi harz hai and those things makes the song more beautiful, so try it) and as I suggested to Sanjay as well!!

WELL DONE, DUDE!!!!

U R Right, Sanjay!!!! The word JISKE is has not come out good at some places!!! I heard the song in using headphones once again and the words it extra sharp at some places which looses its naturality!! But I am afraid, there is no way I could fix that yaar

Guys, I have a nice friend called Arvind who is a VERY VERY popular member of eSnips. While I was browsing Arvindbhai's 'Tip and Tricks for Better Singing' folder, I found this quote of Arvindbhai which is very very important and I always try my best to consider all these things metculously when I record any song! I would request all the singers here to make a note of these guidance and follow exactly as Arvindbhai guides here

ArvindBhai Says!!


Arvindbhai Ki Jay Ho!!!!

Hello doston,

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aaj finally mera grrrrrrrr toh pahuch hee gaya forum mai. shayad voh maine badi chupke se likhkha tha kisi ne dekha hee nahi.



kaise ho sub? belated happy diwali from me.



aab shayad mere msg's aaenge. kaafi dino se aap sub ko sun rahi hun aur msg's bhi padh rahi hun. aap ki forum se bahut kuch seekhne ko mila hai. jaise ke recording kaise karte hai, saans kaise lete hai. aur aur "jalte" ko kaise gaate hai



omkar thank you so much for such a warm welcome to this forum. aur haan bina sune duet ki lambiiiiiiii line lagane ka bhi shukriya.

aab sun ne ke baad line se hate toh nahi na aap log?



idol sis you sing beautifully. loved reading your msg's as well. i heard everyone's recordings here. accept those uploaded in .rar files. shayad voh anwar_fan ke the. esnips widget upload karo toh achcha hai na. everyone can hear it.

king rafi jee bahut hee achcha gaate ho aap. amod aap bhi, dono se shayad ek hee gana bhi suna tha. dono ne apne dhang se poori feelings se gaya tha.



sanjkashbhai aap ka chian se hum ko suna. wow! didnt realize that it would sound so wonderful in a male voice. great job.



omkar tumhari toh kya baat hai. jalte hai jiske liye, jo gana sune bina mujhe neend nahi aati wahi aap ne ga liya. aur yeh doston ne toh kya gaur se suna hai. ek ek lawz par dhyaan dete. i know i'm new, but i expect the same from you all.



no butter plzzzzzzz, and no suger either. i'm on a no butter, no suger diet. toh thoda sa karela daal ke mujhe bhi criticism dena ok?



agar yeh post jata hai toh i'll post the song in the next msg.



pata nahi kitani baar aap logon se baaten ki hai, aur voh hawa mai hee ur gayee.



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hi all again,

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here's another one of my songs. tamatar baju mai rakh ke sun na doston.










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Hear, Hear.......I LOVE ARVIND BHAI