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हमारी मेहफ़ील, सा रे ग म प |
OMkar |
Nov 9 2007, 09:19 PM
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Dedicated Member Group: Members Posts: 2510 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Newcastle, UK Member No.: 7772 |
Laxmi Poojan Ke Is Shubh Avsar par, Aap Sab Ko Dipawali Ki Hardik Shubhechhayein!
Only THIS MOMENT is in my hand and I just want to live that Perfectly!!! |
OMkar |
Nov 12 2007, 03:46 AM
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Dedicated Member Group: Members Posts: 2510 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Newcastle, UK Member No.: 7772 |
Bhailog, Yahan Par Itni GHANGHOR Shanti Kyon Hai????
Amodbhai, just one suggesion for you dude!!! Why dont u write the words in Hindi on paper, then scan it and upload jpg image of the paper!!! (e.g. The way uploaded 'Pyare Bandhuon on the first page of this thread) This will help us make ur lovely poetry more readable... See yaar, Hindi is Hindi!! And for Hindi poetry should be read in Hindi script.. Just my opinion!! Kya bolte ho yaar? Anwarbhai, HumTumbhai and Harishbhai, I really feel we are all mature enough and dont think we will ever compare each other if we all sing one song one after another. In fact, this makes such a lovely atmosphere. For example, when you Harish sung 'Man Re Tu Kahe na dheer dhare', everyone was tempted so much to sing their own version. And we all heard the version sung by Harish, Sanjay and Amod... Believe me, I really loved it... Kitna lovely atmosphere ban gaya thaa!! I dont think I ever thought that Amod sung better than Sanjay or Harish or vice versa. I will keep an eye more closely and the moment anyone compare us with each other, we will politely tell the person stop there itself... And I really dont think anyone from our forum is that immature!! Guys, I think you should think over it again. What do u think Sanjay? Ok now, today I recorded first Non-KishoreAmit song. The song is Talat Mehmood's 'Jalte Hain Jiske Liye' Only THIS MOMENT is in my hand and I just want to live that Perfectly!!! |
King Rafi |
Nov 12 2007, 11:52 AM
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#258
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Member Group: Members Posts: 216 Joined: 12-April 07 From: Mumbai Member No.: 13821 |
GHANGOR shanti, lol!!
Good idea for Amod bhai. But a scanner might not always be available at hand. He can also use the hindi script like you OMkarbhai. How do you do that? There are several ways, and for me the best way is to install this program 'Baraha', and whenever that program is on, whatever u type comes in the language selected in Baraha, anf after you are through, just close the program, and u r back typing English. <quote><b>Quote by OMkar bhai</b> I will keep an eye more closely and the moment anyone compare us with each other, we will politely tell the person stop there itself... And I really dont think anyone from our forum is that immature!! </quote> I agree with this, but I don't think we'll do it in public, but we might do it in mind. First of all there are just 5 of us who sing and post, and the last thing we want is someone to leave and stop posting their songs because they think they are not 'good enough'. Jalte Hai Jiske Liye? WOW!! Where is it????? Looks like a teaser campaign from you. Your first non-KK-Ak song? You mean u have never recorded a Rafi song? One problem here at HF is the animosity between KK and MR fans, though I have found mature people like you or King Kishore are not a part of it. When it comes to singing, first comes Rafi saab. Then comes God.
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OMkar |
Nov 12 2007, 03:04 PM
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#259
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Dedicated Member Group: Members Posts: 2510 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Newcastle, UK Member No.: 7772 |
GHANGOR shanti, lol!! Good idea for Amod bhai. But a scanner might not always be available at hand. He can also use the hindi script like you OMkarbhai. How do you do that? There are several ways, and for me the best way is to install this program 'Baraha', and whenever that program is on, whatever u type comes in the language selected in Baraha, anf after you are through, just close the program, and u r back typing English. <quote><b>Quote by OMkar bhai</b> I will keep an eye more closely and the moment anyone compare us with each other, we will politely tell the person stop there itself... And I really dont think anyone from our forum is that immature!! </quote> I agree with this, but I don't think we'll do it in public, but we might do it in mind. First of all there are just 5 of us who sing and post, and the last thing we want is someone to leave and stop posting their songs because they think they are not 'good enough'. Jalte Hai Jiske Liye? WOW!! Where is it????? Looks like a teaser campaign from you. Your first non-KK-Ak song? You mean u have never recorded a Rafi song? One problem here at HF is the animosity between KK and MR fans, though I have found mature people like you or King Kishore are not a part of it. Harish, I just wrote those lyrics on paper, scanned it and then upload the .jpg file, thats it. I will have look at Bahara once I am less busy So Harish, lets now hear from Anwar Mian and HumTumbhai about it And I would kindly request everyone of us 5 who post their song; please do not get demoralised by anyone's good quality, rather get encouraged to sing more and more nice. Guys, dont forget we LOVE music and singing. AND THIS PLACE IS NOT TO SHOW ANY DOMINATION FROM ONE SINGER TO ANOTHER! Harish, may be u r right, but I did not notice the animosity btw KK and MR forums! I never sung non-KishoreAmit song is just because I never had guts to sing Rafisahab's songs. I always felt I could be able to sing some of Kishoreda songs. Anyways, here is my first try. I finalised it after 1 hr 30mins... Only THIS MOMENT is in my hand and I just want to live that Perfectly!!! |
OMkar |
Nov 12 2007, 03:12 PM
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Dedicated Member Group: Members Posts: 2510 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Newcastle, UK Member No.: 7772 |
Version Singer: OMkar
Only THIS MOMENT is in my hand and I just want to live that Perfectly!!! |
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Anwar_Fan |
Nov 12 2007, 04:23 PM
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Regular Member Group: Members Posts: 898 Joined: 18-January 06 Member No.: 4348 |
Wow…Omkar Bhai……wonderful rendition…sounds perfect……love some of the adhaigee Yoon Hi Awaara Phire without the breath pause and also done in Talat’s style……beautiful Tehrau.
Sounds like Kishore Da singing Talat song Talat style……Wah…a real treat |
Amod |
Nov 12 2007, 05:29 PM
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Version Singer: OMkar OMKAR BHAU! Nice try. Keep it up. As said my Anwar_fan ... KK singing Talat Song! BTW there is one more stanza (in the original sound track) which is equally good (the 1st one). Amod Log, ek taraf, maY ko sharaab kehtey hai Uss chasm-e-saaQee shaY ko janaab kehtey hai / |
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King Rafi |
Nov 12 2007, 06:01 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 216 Joined: 12-April 07 From: Mumbai Member No.: 13821 |
A beautiful example of how KK wd have sung this song if SDB had chosen him! Yaar OMkar, tera awaaz tere guru se kitna milta julta hai! Yes, you have carried out all the twists in the lines very well, especially the following words
ye in line 1 of first antara bhi in line 2 of first antara when u sang the mukhda for the first time, you sang 'wohi' and when u sang it for the sang time you sang 'wahi'. Personally i prefer the 'wohi'. I think the only word that has not come correctly is 'main' as in geet 'main' tere liye, in the mukhda and last lines of antara. But great singing nevertheless for such a tough song! Well done OMkar bhai!! When it comes to singing, first comes Rafi saab. Then comes God.
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geet |
Nov 12 2007, 06:42 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 30 Joined: 19-October 07 From: USA Member No.: 27999 |
hello all,
just wanted to thank you all for your comments on my song. and belated best wishes for the diwali season. hope everyone had a sweet and musical diwali i'v heard everyone's voices here. idol sis your song on raag yaman kalyaan was very sweet. king rafi i'v heard all your songs on esnips. your voice is very soothing and definetly fits the rafi songs and also gazals. anwar_fan, aap ke paheloo mai aakar ro diye was wonderful very sweet voice. duet ki toh such mai aap logon ne line laga di hai. aur tab jab suna bhi nahi tha. sun ne ke baad mind change toh na hi hua? hehe amod, i was not able to hear you since i'm unable to download rar files. same with some other users like king kishor and sanjkash. i hope to hear you soon. did i miss anyone? thanks omkar for such an overwhelming welcome and for posting my song. here is another song by me that was recorded earlier. i hope you like it. i hope to share my passion of singing with this gang and hope to improve with everyone's help and bring some maturity to my childlike voice. <table bgcolor="#000000" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr><td><embed quality="high" pluginspage="http://www.macromedia.com/go/getflashplayer" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" bgcolor="#000" width="328" height="94" src="http://res0.esnips.com/escentral/images/widgets/flash/esnips_player.swf" flashvars="theTheme=gold&autoPlay=no&theFile=http://www.esnips.com//nsdoc/86b8f3ad-1957-4aff-8b9d-109c6417d563&theName=koi yaha aha nache nache&thePlayerURL=http://res0.esnips.com/escentral/images/widgets/flash/mp3WidgetPlayer.swf"></embed></td></tr><tr><td><table cellpadding="2" style="font-family:Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; padding-left:2px; color:#FFFFFF; text-decoration:none ; ; font-size:10px; font-weight:bold"><tr><td><a style="color:#FFFFFF; text-decoration:none " href="http://www.esnips.com/CreateWidgetAction.ns?type=0&objectid=86b8f3ad-1957-4aff-8b9d-109c6417d563"> Get this widget </a></td><td style="font-size:7px; font-weight:normal;">|</td><td align="center"><a align="center" style="color:#FFFFFF; text-decoration:none " href="http://www.esnips.com/doc/86b8f3ad-1957-4aff-8b9d-109c6417d563/koi-yaha-aha-nache-nache/?widget=flash_player_esnips_gold"> Track details </a></td><td style="font-size:7px; font-weight:normal;">|</td><td><a align="center" style="color:#FF6600; text-decoration:none" href="http://www.esnips.com//adserver/?action=visit&cid=player_dna&url=/socialdna"> eSnips Social DNA </a></td></tr></table></td></tr></table> glad to have the fansi ka fanda taken off my neck, aaaah i can breath (i can post) geet "sangeet jaha hai geet waha, hai geet jaha sangeet waha"
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OMkar |
Nov 12 2007, 08:05 PM
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#265
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Dedicated Member Group: Members Posts: 2510 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Newcastle, UK Member No.: 7772 |
Arey Baap Re!!! KK singing Talat song!! Thats one of the best compliment I could ever get!!! Thanks guys!!! But guys believe me, I tried a lottttt to sing like OMkar and hope one day I will succeed to sound like pure OMkar. May be, I have to change my diction... But then again I am confused, how should I pronounce if not like this??? Chalo Koi Baat Nahi!!!
Harish, u r absolutely right. I noticed that 'Wohi' thing and also 'Hai' as u mention... Good observation, dude!! Yaar, u know what??? When I sing the song and when I close the eyes I forget my lines sooooo many times and I have to re-record the songsss In case of 'Dekho Maine Dekha' song, I sun complete song nicely and then after I finalized it, I realised that I sung it 'Dekho maine.... Phoolon ke sheher mein HO ghar apna', whereas actually its 'phoolon.... HAI ghar apna'..... The whole meaning changes with this silly mistake... And then I had to re-record those lines again and patch them!!! Gossshhh, pata nahi mujhe ho kya jata hai, sometimes!! Anwar mian, thanks for ur lovely comments but yaar kitne din hue aapki madhur aawaaz suni nahi!!!! Amod, have you thought about posting ur poetry in Hindi?? Soch yaar!!! We will all enjoy!! And try to write it down with ur handwriting... It gives much nice effect!!!! What do u think??? Yeh Sanjay, Khobibehen kidhar hai???? Yaar, yeh HF mein itne Rati Maharathi log hain... Like Amaanush, Azgarkhan, behenji-turned-moderator, ravikumar, eskayes, etc!! Why all of these are not participating??? Is it because we really singing soo good???? And then they feel that they are less good than us??? No yaarooo, we all sing fairly ok...But we surely improve day by day, but with help of each other's sincere comments, feedback and passion. We improvise not only our singing but also the passion of singing!!! So please and please come ahead and sing here!! Only THIS MOMENT is in my hand and I just want to live that Perfectly!!! |
OMkar |
Nov 12 2007, 08:09 PM
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Dedicated Member Group: Members Posts: 2510 Joined: 30-November 06 From: Newcastle, UK Member No.: 7772 |
My Request to Admin:
Please allow GEET (username: geet) to post her msgs and participate in Mehfil as we are all waiting for her to post her lovely songs here and rock this forum!! I would appreciate if all others could support my request Only THIS MOMENT is in my hand and I just want to live that Perfectly!!! |
sanjkash |
Nov 12 2007, 10:19 PM
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Regular Member Group: Members Posts: 862 Joined: 16-January 07 Member No.: 9573 |
Hi All, @ALL HF Friends ... THANK-YOU FOR YOUR APPRECIATION. IT WILL INDEED PUSH ME TO TRY EVEN MORE. But frankly i am no one to attemt songs sung by Talat Saheb. I love his singing much too much ... but then this forum and all the well-meaning friends does make one feel comfortable so that one feels like giving it a try. I am the most stringent critic of my own renderings and the one in question would not even fetch 2 out of 10, and i meant it. So your appreciation and encouragement may make me reach at least 5 out of 10 during my lifetime (Inshaa-Allah). @Sanjay your response and request to post my Lyrics has made me even bolder. I am presenting a Gazal here. (BTW 'Dil-se' is been my pen name) Unsay chhupaa chhupaa ke hai, aadat si pad ga_ii Aa_ii_naa bhi ab gaur say, maiN dekhataa nahi Aa_inaa bhi dekhooN to wohi aatay hai nazar Kis kis say yeh kahooN kay unsay wasataa nahi? Dil ko bachaa bachaa ke, mehfil meN kyaa gaye Phool chupaayaa thaa, khushboo pataa nahi ...! Dill isay tu apni aaj maan Le fateH WoH jaan gaye unki taraf dekhataa nahi Yeh pyaar hi hai unkaa, 'dil-se' to maan le 'KyuN aaye ho yahaa?', woh tumsay pooNchtaa nahi ..! Attached ... are the words of this gazal (prose) in my voice ... Please give your comments. Amod Amod, Wah kyaa ghazal. DHOOM DHADAAKEBAAJ! You need to continue to bring variety to this thread. I am vey much enjoying this. Lekin meri Urdu zara kuchh aisi waisihi hai. Thanks for sharing a great ghazal. Sanjay |
geet |
Nov 12 2007, 10:24 PM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 30 Joined: 19-October 07 From: USA Member No.: 27999 |
aaaaaarrrrrrrrr grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
"sangeet jaha hai geet waha, hai geet jaha sangeet waha"
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sanjkash |
Nov 12 2007, 10:41 PM
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Regular Member Group: Members Posts: 862 Joined: 16-January 07 Member No.: 9573 |
A Sample of Fast Khayal on Raag Yaman---- (keep in mind, i didn't master this raag yet , so u might find mistakes) Piya Binn Khobi behen, Bahot khob (khub). Aapki aawaz bahut hi sweet hai (even Pya Binn). Kyaa baat hai. Sweet aawaz aur classical song, maza aa gaya. I do not know what is your ambition (PhD or singing). Agar classical singer banana hai to practice bahut karni padegi. As an earli classical singer you have done a great job. Sanjay |
sanjkash |
Nov 12 2007, 11:02 PM
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Regular Member Group: Members Posts: 862 Joined: 16-January 07 Member No.: 9573 |
Version Singer: OMkar OMkarbhau, This is indeed a very nice try. Talat in KK's (I would rather tend to say AK's) aawaz. Most of the Talat songs are difficult for breathing and wavering (modulations). While you managed well the breathing (at some places appeared tough for breathing), Wavering was KK style, which I find great as we are here with our own versions and to encourage everyone's creativity. I also loved you placed the lyrics at the same time. So one more feather in your cap that will let you and others open up even further. Just last really small comment, I felt (and I may be 500% wrong) with "Jiske" there was something wrong (I do not know whether it was "wavering" or whether it was the note). In fact I found "Geet main tere liye" was very well sung. Thanks and we are waiting for the "Man re tu kahe na" in KK ki aawaz.. Sanjay |
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